Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 01:10 am

Part 1- Five miles from Area-51 _______________________________________ "We are enroute, to Area-51!" Delta 1, answered loudly. For some days, the government and military have lost contact with the military base "Area-51" The last thin, they heard from them. Was a distress call from one of the scienitst about some sort of monsters attacking. Thats when, they decided to send in Delta Force. To find out what happened and retrieve any information and survivors............... "We are getting, ready to land! Lock N Load!" Delta 1 called out to his squad. Since Delta Force does not exist, they are reconized as delta teams. For example one member would be "Delta 2" And the captains are always reconized at Delta 1. As the blackhawks landed. Two teams of Delta force squads landed 5 miles from Area-51, not knowing what was about to be their fate.......................

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 01:23 am

oh and comments please ^^ on so far how i am doing.

Posted by: Ti_Cat December 18, 2004 02:02 am

Pretty good! I like your idea and its got area 51 in it!

Posted by: Evil Gn0me December 18, 2004 02:05 am

Wow, good story. Im waiting it to be continued

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 02:35 am

Part 2-Enroute to Area-51 __________________________________________ "Yeah,yeah" Delta 2. Said. We had been discussing our thoughts about what happened at Area-51. "We are less then 2 miles, men!" I said to my squad. They refered to me as Delta 1. Since I am the Captain of the squad. "Stay Sharp" I said. As we walked along the sand. We saw the base. AS we walked through the path leading to the base. No MP's were there to stop us. Suddenly we heard the distant zip of an M16, and some pistols that had erupted somewhere on the base. "Look the like the party is here!" Delta 3 said aloud. Then we heard a scream. "Move it! LETS GO!" I yelled and motioned to my men to follow me. We quickly loaded our Car15's and moved into the base............ {comments?}

Posted by: Skulky December 18, 2004 02:37 am

Aliens maybe

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 02:44 am

Nope. You will find out later.

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 02:52 am

Part 3-Deadly Enemies _______________________________________ "GO GO GO!" I screamed. Ever since we had entered the base. These flesh eating things. Had attacked us from out of no where. It was like no other thing. I had encountered,they were fast, and super agile. They had killed one of my men. I planned to advenge him, if it meant losing my life in the process. "SHIT!. THEY ARE BREAKIN IN!" Delta 3 screamed. As a massive amount of them, came pouring in. "AHHH!" Delta 2 screamed as, they overcamed him and began charging towards me and the rest of my team. "Open Fire!" I yelled. Gunfire soon erupted in the small hangor. We wrere holding in. There was so many of them. I thought to myself "Is this a nightmare!?" "Is this hell?!? Suddenly a dark figure lunged at me. With his hands. I fell into the hard metel wall and blacked out.................. {Comments?}

Posted by: Nikku December 18, 2004 03:07 am

this story is teh................ PURE PWNAGE!!!!!!

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 04:52 pm

Part4-Friends Lost _____________________________________ "On your feet" A voice came from above me. Suddenly i felt like i was being tooken by the shoulders and being shaken. Then I realized I was still here,in this nightmare. "Ouch my head! What happened?" I questioned the amn standing above me. It seems you are the only survivor of your squad. When those zombies attacked.... "Zombies?" I questioned him. I had thought zombies were fake. "Yes zombies, since they are well.....dead" He told me. I nodded quietly. "Follow me. Don't ask questions" He said. I stood up and he motioned for me to follow him. As we left one of the hangars. We jogged alond the airfield. I could see a battle had tooken place. Jeeps were turned over,bodies piled everywhere,smoldering craters. He then stopped at a small,square building. "Follow me" He told me again. He soon went into the buidiling. I followed him in. As we walked along the hallways, we could see rooms,stocked up with ammunition. "So where are my friends?" I asked him. "Dead" He responded quietly. I began to think "Why had this happen!?, What the hell is going on?" I kept thinking. I could feel the tears buidling up in my eyes. I remainded strong. Since men don't cry,they are strong. He then lead me to a small amunition room. "Stock up" He said. I could see much of my ammunition was out. As i went in. I could see my type of ammunition. I reached up and grabbed it. Suddenly out of no came a scream. Then, a...monster came running down the hallways screaming. With his arms out. He then caught the sight of the man who had said "Stock up" and charged toward him. "Son of a!" He screamed. And took an Glock 22 out and opened fired. The zombie now layed on the floor. Cold and grey in the face. I could tell he had been dead for atleast several hours. Thats when I saw it. A badge on his shoulder. A "Daggar" image. I quickly knew.....it was one of my friends. As i knelt down by him. I started crying then turned to the man "WHY DID YOU KILL HIM!?" I screamed. He just stood there. "WHY!?" I screamed again. He then took a couple of steps towards me. I stood up. We made eyecontact. Suddenly he smacked me in the face, and took me by the shoulders. "THESE THINGS ARE DEAD! DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND!? IT WOULD OF ETHER BEEN HIM OR ME. GOT IT!?" I nodded slowly, he then let go of me. "Stay here" He told me and walked right of an corner and disappered. I then turned away and looked at the cold body on the floor. I could see the bite marks on him. I could tell my friend was dead for good. He would no longer. Talk to me,cheer me up,or do anything we had did together......................

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 06:11 pm

Please post comments. As i add to the story.

Posted by: Elite viking December 18, 2004 06:30 pm

Nice story. A few typos, nothing big. This could be a damn good story,if you really put your soul in it instead of plain violence. tip: put in a ninja! ninjas are a must for any story, with their big katana

Posted by: OneoftheLost December 18, 2004 06:33 pm

more details....cause who the hell is the rescuer? you never described him..maybe i skipped over that part...anyway who is he a MP a memeber of another sqaud...what? and yer going SUPER FAST. oh well its a good story and I like it....although is everyone doing a military story? I am Nikku is Foxtrot I think is....hmm...anyway keep it up! Ill keep reading.

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 06:49 pm

all will be explained in part5

Posted by: Grey Snake December 18, 2004 07:16 pm

Part 5- The Truth __________________________________________- I continued to stare at the body. That now lay on the floor. When the man came back. He had brought two, what looked liked to be MP's. "Take the body,before it starts smelling" He told the two Mp's. They both nodded and picked one end of the body together. As they took the body and rounded the corner I asked the man what was his name. "My name is Ben Pickersmen, I am a MP here" He told me. "Who are you,and what are you doing here?" He questioned me. "Thats Classifed" I told him. He then nodded. "Tell me what happened here?" I asked him. "Well, it started just some days ago. We were trying to create a gas that would turn our eneimes....into....what your friend was. Once the enemy had all turned into zombies. We would just nuke them." He explained to me. "It was to prevent more of our soldiers from being killed in action. Thats when one of our scientist stole some of the "gas" and took it and transfered it through the vents. We do not know of his wherabouts" He told me. Then I could sense there was something else he wanted to tell me. He then did. "There is another thing....we have heard reports from some of our MP's that. They had encountered some zombies, but much stronger and faster. With huge claws that rip you to shreds." After he was done talking. He motioned me again to follow me, but this time outside. "Follow me, there is a radio. That you can call your friends or the army to help us, but it in one of our office buildings..." He hesitated before telling me the rest. "Its infested with those things. Thats why we are sending you,and about 10 MP's in to try to retrieve the radio" He told me as we walked along the dusty concreate ground. "So its pretty much suicde?" I told him with a chuckle. He laughed for a second. "Yep" He answered and returned to his frown. Suddenly we heard a cry from a person and gunfire. "Lets go!" Ben yelled to me. I nodded and we both jogged around one of the hangars to discover what we heard............

Posted by: Nikku December 18, 2004 08:12 pm

QUOTE (OneoftheLost @ Dec 18 2004, 06:33 PM) I am Nikku is Foxtrot I think is....hmm...anyway keep it up! Ill keep reading. Whaat the fuck did you mean?!

Posted by: Grey Snake December 19, 2004 06:27 am

He forgot to add his comoas. He meant. That He,Nikku,and Foxtrot and doing miltary stores.

Posted by: Nikku December 19, 2004 06:10 pm

i am doing a Military story, and a few civalain storys.

Posted by: DavidRoxZoRs December 20, 2004 04:09 am

Nice story man keep goin

Posted by: Grey Snake December 20, 2004 05:35 pm

Part 6-Race aganst Time ______________________________________ Me and Ben quickly jogged around one of the hangar's to see the action. MP's were firing like crazy at zombies coming from every direction. A man on an M60 was quickly overcomed by the massive amount of the undead. A soldier was crawling on the ground. Trying to excape. "Help me!" He screamed at me. Suddenly some of the zombies heard him and charged after him. I quickly pulled my gun out and fired. *datdatdatdat* The sound of my gun erupted through Area-51 and I could see the zombie stumble backwards, then felll on the ground. I walked near it. Then put my boot on its chest abnd spit at it. The zombies suddenly opened its eyes and with its teeth tried to bite me. I took my sidearm. A Desert Eagle and shot its head. I could see my bullit had went right through his head. How disgusting it was. "Delta 1!" A man yelled at me. As he jumped on the M60 and started mowing the zombies down. "Where is Alpha Team?" He screamed at me. As he contiuned firing at the horde of zombies. "Get Down!" I said to him. He wasted no time in jumping down with his hands on his head. I fired an gernade from my Car15. *Boom* I heard the loud booming sound it made. Just before me eyes. I could see that. I had almost killed all of the zombies by where. That person who had called me Delta 1, had been. Almost all of the zombies were now dead or lying on the ground in agony. "Where is Alpha Team?!" He asked me, as he started walking towards me. I could see that he was apart of Delta Force. Since he had the Daggar Badge on him. "They all where eliminated" I replied to him. He just stood there, frozen. Then looked up at me and replied "So is Bravo Team" He had tears in his eyes now. Suddenly....... *SELF-DESTRUCTION OF THE BASE LAUNCHED* A loud voice came over the intercom. "What the Fuck?!" I said. *60 SECONDS TO ABANDON AREA-51* The loud voice came over the intercom. Me, Ben and Delta 8 {Saw his name on the Dagggar Badge} Started running, trying to find the path that led from the base. "THE RADIO!" I screamed. I kept running. "don't worry, I got a walkie-Talkie" That was all Delta 8 said. "There!" Ben shrieked with joy. He had discovered the path away from the base. *30 SECONDS* The voice over the intercom came again. They made it to the path and followed it, still running. *15 SECONDS* The group started panicking now. As they neared the end of the path. They could see the desert. "Yay!" Ben said. Suddenly out of no where. They heard a loud moan and then something jumping up in the air. Who could it be?

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 01:03 am

comments?

Posted by: Nikku December 21, 2004 01:10 am

it..... Sux RULES!

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 03:08 am

Thanks

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 04:09 pm

Part 7-The Last Battle _____________________________________ Suddenly as the group heard the large moan. A large thing jumped above them. "Look out!" Ben screamed. We ran away. The monster looked at us with its two big eyes. It had two large claws, and was very tall. "YOU WILL NOT LIVE!" The monster screamed at us. "Thats the scientist that stole the gas!" Ben replied. "YES I AM THE SCIENTIST. I INFECTED MYSELF WITH A VIRUS I MADE!" The mutated scientist replied with a large laugh. *10 SECONDS UNTIL SELF-DESTRUCTION* The voice over the intercom came again. Suddenly the mutated scientist dashed in front of Delta 8 and took its claw and slashed him in the chest. "Delta 8!" I shrieked. Delta 8 fell backwards and then fell on the ground. Blood was pouring out of his wound and from his mouth and ears. "k..i...l..hi" He tried to say something but couldn't. He choked up some blood and then closed his eyes. I could tell he was dead. I quickly took my Car15 out and looked at the monster. Fire raged in my eyes, I quickly opened fired on him. He stumbled backwards with a shock. "Suck on THIS!" Ben pulled his Desert Eagle and repatly began shooting the mutated scientist in the head. It stumbled backwards again and then fell backwards into the sand. "Is it dead?" I asked Ben. *5 seconds until self-destruction of Area-51!* The intercom said. "NO TIME! RUN!" Ben screamed. I nodded and we both began running as far away from Area-51 as possible. *5,4,3,2,1* The intercom came over again. A loud siren was sounded over Area-51. Both Ben and Delta 1 got away safely. Then the base exploded. Ben and Delta 1 sat back and watched as the sky turned to bloodred. They both thought "Its finally over" "The radio!" I yelled. "No need for it" Ben replied with a grin on his face. "When you where fighting that monster. I scooped the walkie-talkie up and put it in my pocket" He said. I grinned also. He then took the radio out and handed it to me. I quickly got headquarters and explained to them what happened. They didn't believe me, but sent BlackHawks to pick us up. As Me and Ben got on the blackhawks. We took off, I hoped that in heaven my friends, were at peace......... The End

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 04:18 pm

comments on my story please. And you can post and tell me like what kind of story you like to me to make. My brain has overloaded and i can't think straight.

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 04:29 pm

cmon comments.

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 04:30 pm

cmon comments.

Posted by: Elite viking December 21, 2004 05:09 pm

i'll comment since you commented mine But you dont have to post 3 posts in 10 minutes saying "please comment". No one is in so often... it's pretty good. I wish you could describe some more... like how that mutated scientist looked like, how area 51 was . And please, it never is 2 survivors from 4 whole squads...

Posted by: Grey Snake December 21, 2004 05:54 pm

Well....the first squad was wiped out in the begenning of story and the second squad were elinated too. The only delta survivos were delta 8 and 1 but 8 got killed. Also there were MP survivors in area-51 but they didn't make it out before the base blew up. Now someone tell me a story they would like to seemade.

Posted by: DavidRoxZoRs December 24, 2004 02:56 am

a story where main character is the mutated scientist guy maybe?

Posted by: OneoftheLost December 24, 2004 02:59 am

umm sorry DavidRoxZoRs but no..no..NO.. that would be to wierd..anyway great story Grey Snake I like it, but like he said need more details to it...anyway keep it up yer a good writer..imm get back to my story now later!

Posted by: DavidRoxZoRs December 24, 2004 03:17 am

You can just call me David or Dave or Dav or Davi or Da or something

Posted by: Grey Snake December 24, 2004 03:27 am

eh read my new story. City of the Dead.