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Carina, Sex, Love, Betrayal, zombies,and Beer| Mr.B |
Posted: July 24, 2005 07:50 pm
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hey i'm going to back off of this story for a littl ebit and work on GAtes of Heaven and Hell.
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: July 24, 2005 08:17 pm
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I wonder if anyone has acctually masturbated over this?
-------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Mr.B |
Posted: July 25, 2005 06:35 pm
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The streets and alleyways were dank and empty, not a sound came to there ears as they walked in silence. They had just barely gotten out of the cemetery. Now they were playing hide and seek with the dead.
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| Mr.B |
Posted: August 01, 2005 07:07 pm
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The streets and alleyways were dank and empty, not a sound came to there ears as they walked in silence. They had just barely gotten out of the cemetery. Now they were playing hide and seek with the dead.
2 City of Night The Clamor of a new morning slowly rose, as if connected to the rising sun, at sun down the clamor would lessen but never subside. The pubs, Hoar houses and casinos were always open. This was the grate city of Anicarta Capital of the once powerful Thoridian Empire. The Empire formally stretched from the plains of Cornco to the edge of the Dark elf Caves. (to give you an idea of the size that is the equivalent of from Britain to Oregon the long way.) A fear had settled over the city however. A fear of what lay just beyond the walls. The Empire had been beaten back to just the city in about two years, no one know who or what had done this. Some blamed the dark elves who the empire couldnt conquer during its golden age. No one knew the truth though. -------------------- |
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| -=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: August 01, 2005 07:40 pm
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 Eh...no...just...no...The story is all right, but it just doesn't seem to really be in my area. Good job anyways! --------------------  (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: August 02, 2005 06:57 pm
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I have other stories. -------------------- |
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: August 02, 2005 07:05 pm
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Chris has he's trying to pretend he hasnt b acting all cool  -------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Mr.B |
Posted: August 04, 2005 07:03 pm
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I am probaly not post any thing for a little bit on any stories becuase i got a lot to do
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| Mr.B |
Posted: August 08, 2005 07:58 pm
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The Orc guards paced back and forth along the wall always ready to let loose a wall of lead from there chain guns. The large metal Gates into the city were open for now letting in any who wished. In a caravan some miles out of the city a family was moving with some difficulty. They had a fourteen year old daughter who was flirting with some of the solders that passed; her step mother worried her self silly trying to keep her away from the solders. Her father how ever wasnt concerned about her, she had a secret that only her father and real mother knew.
The nine year old boy that tagged along with her ware ever she went was her brother Nashu he shared the same secret as her but neither there mother nor father knew it as he had been found homeless. They moved in a caravan towards the grate city of Anicarta as refugees fleeing from that evil. The father known as RougthGar was a strong looking man with a strange uneasiness where ever he went, almost as if he thought the devil himself was casing him. -------------------- |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: August 12, 2005 09:29 pm
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They were crossing a meadow with grass as tall as Nashu.
Look Nashu, His sister Melina said pointing to the city of Anicarta across the meadows softly rolling hills that the winds made waves on. Our new home. The sun was at high noon when they entered the city. They made there way through the densely packed streets to there apartment complex. Night came eventually and the noise of the city quieted a bit. One sound at midnight however brought the entire city alive again. It was the sound of the Gates closing and the call TO ARMS TO ARMS! -------------------- |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: September 14, 2005 11:03 pm
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Swamp of time A low mist had settled over the swamp weed and grass choking out what little light made it through the high canopy. Methane rose through the humid air slowly and methodically making the air yet harder to breathe. All this and more Thelina cursed. she had been stuck in this swap land for more than twenty days. Her water ran out on the fifth day she had had no sleep in all the days she has been trudging through this god forsaken land for fear of sinking into the mud and shit. She was a solder and was making it through on orders to find the battle guard wraths of the swap. One would not know it from looking at her now but she was distinctly gorgeous. She had before entering the swamp a lively air around her that only a half nymph could have. However unlike her mother who is a nymph she was a fighter. A gnarled looking stump, rotten beyond all else, but it was a spot to rest for a little bit. She took off her heavy pack and tied it to her ankle so it wouldnt sink out of reach. Now she sat down and relaxed. The rotten log crushed a little under the unexpected weight. She slowly against all her efforts drifted to sleep. She dreamed of when she was younger, as a teen of eighteen. Her physical appearance attracted all the boys. Her autumn light brown hair wasnt wavy it was strait but the way she styled it made it look a thousand times better. At a time when the two schools of mastery were at war, Thalina was trying to get the attention of a vary strange human who called himself FarJehen he was from some place up to the far north. He was the tallest and strongest human at her school although no other thing at her school was as mysterious as Nanue`. He was a dark elf yes thats right. He didnt do things like one thou. He took lessons on protection not assassination like all the others and he mastered all forms of sorcery not just concealment. About two years latter when she was just about to end all mastery teachings her school was destroyed. Nanue` protected those that he could and led them deep into the Dark caverns of the mountain pass. He then proceeded to lead them to a portal, guarded by the dead. He knew the pass code and so we were spared. The portal let out in a swamp next to a road that went into what was then the Thoridian Empire although a few days latter it wasnt. Sorry for the delay but my computers been out. -------------------- |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: September 21, 2005 12:15 am
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The stumps stirrings woke her, now it wasnt just the stump it was the whole swamp shaking and sinking, taking her with it. She got up; trying desperately not to fall over and loosing her rifle in the process stumbled towards one of the swamp trees. Thelina tried to grab a branch but the moss made her slip, so she ripped off all the moss and grabbed the branch firmly. The branch in response to the weight snapped and so she fell on her back in the mud. Thelina got up now vary wet and muddy. She ripped the moss from around the tree trunk and grabbing with her legs as well as her hands she bark climbed to a rather thick branch. She draped herself across four other close branches to distribute her weight. When the shaking was over the swamp level had risen to only a foot below where she now lay.
She did not fall asleep this time, no she stayed a wake listening to the sounds of the marsh. When she was rested Thelina broke a branch off the tree; tested the water depth to try and figure out how deep it was. It was too deep, too muddy and too toxic for her to go any where. She was now stuck in a place where you could spend only a day and leave five years after or before entering. -------------------- |
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| Mr.B |
Posted: November 18, 2005 06:05 am
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Nashu The fire warmed his hands. His cave that he lived in was sparse, only the bare essentials; Water, food and warmth. He lived underneath the swamp. Another quake had come it wasnt a large one however. He had been deemed a monster by all but the wraths who couldnt judge. They hadnt the power. It was lonely. His only friend in the world ever, was his sister, and she died at the battle for Anicarta. She died saving his life against a whole horde of zombies. But to this day six years latter. Part of the swamp floor above his head began to give way. Something had fallen; probably another branch. It was strange that the last one was moss less though. A large pile of mud and crude smashed to the floor a few feet away and began to move. Nashu pulled his cloak about him tightly concealing himself. And moved over to the squirming mass and opened up an air hole for what ever it was. He heard gasping, a fine gasping like that of a human not a creature such as a rat. Nashu then overcome by curiosity took all the mud off. What looked back at him made his heart skip a beat. It was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. Even covered in the mud he could see its beauty. Thank you kind sir. She said between gasps of air. Dont talk, just catch your breath. Nashu said fearing she might suffocate. She sat there panting heavily. there is at least four meter between my home and the surface. I know it may not seem like much but at the pace you sink it lasts an eternity. You must have either swum down or had a gigantic breath of air. I swam down. My name is Thelina. She spoke more easily now. -------------------- |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: November 18, 2005 06:00 pm
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Nice, you have talent. You write in a very cool way
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| Mr.B |
Posted: November 26, 2005 08:29 pm
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She finally got a good look at Nashu. All she really saw of him was his hands, blacked by soot and smoke. The rest of him was hidden under a vary large cloak. She guessed he was maybe twice her height. This would make him a giant. She said as much.
No. I am not a giant. What I am is none of your concern. Nashu knew that if he told her he would regret it. He sulked off to a corner of the room and opened a door that Thelina didnt know existed. It was well camouflaged and covered in swamp slime. Nashu looked over his shoulder and motioned for her to follow. The room was larger then the other was. The walls and ceiling were stone, there was no masonry involved. The stones were fitted together in a twelve corner pattern (like the Incas.) the ceiling was dome shaped and made of concrete. -------------------- |
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