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Nikku |
Posted: December 18, 2004 08:12 pm
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Whaat the fuck did you mean?! -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 19, 2004 06:27 am
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He forgot to add his comoas. He meant. That He,Nikku,and Foxtrot and doing miltary stores.
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Nikku |
Posted: December 19, 2004 06:10 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 ![]() |
i am doing a Military story, and a few civalain storys.
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DavidRoxZoRs |
Posted: December 20, 2004 04:09 am
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Nice story man keep goin
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 20, 2004 05:35 pm
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Part 6-Race aganst Time
______________________________________ Me and Ben quickly jogged around one of the hangar's to see the action. MP's were firing like crazy at zombies coming from every direction. A man on an M60 was quickly overcomed by the massive amount of the undead. A soldier was crawling on the ground. Trying to excape. "Help me!" He screamed at me. Suddenly some of the zombies heard him and charged after him. I quickly pulled my gun out and fired. *datdatdatdat* The sound of my gun erupted through Area-51 and I could see the zombie stumble backwards, then felll on the ground. I walked near it. Then put my boot on its chest abnd spit at it. The zombies suddenly opened its eyes and with its teeth tried to bite me. I took my sidearm. A Desert Eagle and shot its head. I could see my bullit had went right through his head. How disgusting it was. "Delta 1!" A man yelled at me. As he jumped on the M60 and started mowing the zombies down. "Where is Alpha Team?" He screamed at me. As he contiuned firing at the horde of zombies. "Get Down!" I said to him. He wasted no time in jumping down with his hands on his head. I fired an gernade from my Car15. *Boom* I heard the loud booming sound it made. Just before me eyes. I could see that. I had almost killed all of the zombies by where. That person who had called me Delta 1, had been. Almost all of the zombies were now dead or lying on the ground in agony. "Where is Alpha Team?!" He asked me, as he started walking towards me. I could see that he was apart of Delta Force. Since he had the Daggar Badge on him. "They all where eliminated" I replied to him. He just stood there, frozen. Then looked up at me and replied "So is Bravo Team" He had tears in his eyes now. Suddenly....... *SELF-DESTRUCTION OF THE BASE LAUNCHED* A loud voice came over the intercom. "What the Fuck?!" I said. *60 SECONDS TO ABANDON AREA-51* The loud voice came over the intercom. Me, Ben and Delta 8 {Saw his name on the Dagggar Badge} Started running, trying to find the path that led from the base. "THE RADIO!" I screamed. I kept running. "don't worry, I got a walkie-Talkie" That was all Delta 8 said. "There!" Ben shrieked with joy. He had discovered the path away from the base. *30 SECONDS* The voice over the intercom came again. They made it to the path and followed it, still running. *15 SECONDS* The group started panicking now. As they neared the end of the path. They could see the desert. "Yay!" Ben said. Suddenly out of no where. They heard a loud moan and then something jumping up in the air. Who could it be? -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 01:03 am
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comments?
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Nikku |
Posted: December 21, 2004 01:10 am
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it.....
RULES! -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 03:08 am
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Thanks
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 04:09 pm
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Part 7-The Last Battle
_____________________________________ Suddenly as the group heard the large moan. A large thing jumped above them. "Look out!" Ben screamed. We ran away. The monster looked at us with its two big eyes. It had two large claws, and was very tall. "YOU WILL NOT LIVE!" The monster screamed at us. "Thats the scientist that stole the gas!" Ben replied. "YES I AM THE SCIENTIST. I INFECTED MYSELF WITH A VIRUS I MADE!" The mutated scientist replied with a large laugh. *10 SECONDS UNTIL SELF-DESTRUCTION* The voice over the intercom came again. Suddenly the mutated scientist dashed in front of Delta 8 and took its claw and slashed him in the chest. "Delta 8!" I shrieked. Delta 8 fell backwards and then fell on the ground. Blood was pouring out of his wound and from his mouth and ears. "k..i...l..hi" He tried to say something but couldn't. He choked up some blood and then closed his eyes. I could tell he was dead. I quickly took my Car15 out and looked at the monster. Fire raged in my eyes, I quickly opened fired on him. He stumbled backwards with a shock. "Suck on THIS!" Ben pulled his Desert Eagle and repatly began shooting the mutated scientist in the head. It stumbled backwards again and then fell backwards into the sand. "Is it dead?" I asked Ben. *5 seconds until self-destruction of Area-51!* The intercom said. "NO TIME! RUN!" Ben screamed. I nodded and we both began running as far away from Area-51 as possible. *5,4,3,2,1* The intercom came over again. A loud siren was sounded over Area-51. Both Ben and Delta 1 got away safely. Then the base exploded. Ben and Delta 1 sat back and watched as the sky turned to bloodred. They both thought "Its finally over" "The radio!" I yelled. "No need for it" Ben replied with a grin on his face. "When you where fighting that monster. I scooped the walkie-talkie up and put it in my pocket" He said. I grinned also. He then took the radio out and handed it to me. I quickly got headquarters and explained to them what happened. They didn't believe me, but sent BlackHawks to pick us up. As Me and Ben got on the blackhawks. We took off, I hoped that in heaven my friends, were at peace......... The End -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 04:18 pm
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comments on my story please. And you can post and tell me like what kind of story you like to me to make. My brain has overloaded and i can't think straight.
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 04:29 pm
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cmon comments.
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Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 04:30 pm
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cmon comments.
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Elite viking |
Posted: December 21, 2004 05:09 pm
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i'll comment since you commented mine
![]() it's pretty good. I wish you could describe some more... like how that mutated scientist looked like, how area 51 was . And please, it never is 2 survivors from 4 whole squads... |
Grey Snake |
Posted: December 21, 2004 05:54 pm
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Well....the first squad was wiped out in the begenning of story and the second squad were elinated too. The only delta survivos were delta 8 and 1 but 8 got killed. Also there were MP survivors in area-51 but they didn't make it out before the base blew up. Now someone tell me a story they would like to seemade.
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DavidRoxZoRs |
Posted: December 24, 2004 02:56 am
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a story where main character is the mutated scientist guy maybe?
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