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Posted: May 21, 2006 04:45 pm
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 4 Joined: May 14, 2006 |
This is the start of my new story, i am working on some more. if u wanna b in, say now. Prolouge: CONTACT *15.09.2008* *squad radio: patrol alpha* Come in, anybody, do you read me? My squad has been surrounded by a group of escaped convicts. Something is wrong with Them, theyre trying to bite me. Weve managed to hold them of, but were now out of ammo. We are barricaded inside an abandoned warehouse. Wait theres something in here -------------------- |
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Posted: May 22, 2006 04:53 am
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Gore God of Massacre Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3115 Joined: April 28, 2005 |
Not bad for a start. Just work a little more on spelling and conventions. |