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Posted: July 24, 2006 05:32 pm
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Rotten Meat Group: Members Posts: 3 Joined: May 29, 2006 |
Johnson years 28 cloths: Milltary Cloths Professioalty: Knifeing
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It Started a day at the job every people was happy until (Kaboom) Half of The Building Explode! but lucky no one was in the half that explode Then A Zombie Came i Took The Fire Axe Now The Battle Begun and i also had a knife --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Johnson: Jimmy! Get Some Weapons i Cover You Back! Jimmy: Alright Lets Get The Weapons And KIll Those Bastard (1 hours later) Johnson: Jimmy! Finally (Picked Up a Ak-47) Jimmy And Johnson: Lets kill em!!!! Zombie: Braaiiinnss Mee Eatt Yourr BRainn Jimmy: Ahhhhhhhh!!!(Dieeeees) Johnson: No JimmY!!! JIMMY!!!! YOU FUCKING BASTARD YOU GONNA PAY! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Johnson:HURRAY WE WON!! Oh My God Nooo! (Dies) Zombie: Delicous Brainnns........ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ The Day Of Nightmare Writen by 1337 Puttfis |
-=Chris Redfield=- |
Posted: July 24, 2006 06:25 pm
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Baby Slayer Group: Members Posts: 1299 Joined: October 19, 2004 |
Um...what the hell? Is this a script or something? Also, spell check is your best friend when it comes to creating stories.
-------------------- (1) I like to beat women. (2) I like to beat babies (3) I like to beat women while beating babies (4). I like to watch women beat their babies...and then I beat the women. |
Mr.B4k4 Terrorist[dumbass] |
Posted: July 24, 2006 06:44 pm
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Just another Survivor Group: Members Posts: 20 Joined: March 11, 2006 |
Not too be mean, but the spelling is horrible, or you probably just did this on purpose. And two it looks like it was written by one of those idiots that spam a lot with l33t language. And I agree with Chris, it does look like a script. The plot or whatever at the beggining is definetely too brief. Now I've never been to the Gary's Forums, but it looks like something they would write there based on the comments I read from other members on the forums in another post. But at the end it doesnt even seem like a story. More like spam. I apologize for my harshness.
Oh yea Chris it's me Soup. This post has been edited by Mr.B4k4 Terrorist[dumbass] on July 24, 2006 06:45 pm -------------------- Plz don't sue me iliketoblowzombieheadsoff cuz i like stick figures too, and I don't have any originality. Bow down to the supreme idiot of the idiots : Got Soup? |