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Town of the Walking Dead:Part 6 Out of here

SpeedMan	Posted: April 29, 2006 08:18 pm
Just another Survivor Group: Members Posts: 21 Joined: April 29, 2006	I got in the helacopter but three zombies is on it so i got my pistol and shoot them. They all fall down. Then i see the nuke. Then i try to get out of here. But the nuke exbloded so it hit the back of the helicopter. So i crashed the neriest city. There was in city with no zombies. And now i was safe. The End

hunter	Posted: April 29, 2006 08:41 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	WTF Man what was that! Wheres the rest of the story? And next time add detail into it, for example: I got in the helacopter but three zombies is on it so i got my pistol and shoot them. You could explain were you shot the zombies and make it more descriptive. All you have done is put a sentence on each line. --------------------

SpeedMan

Posted: April 29, 2006 08:49 pm

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QUOTE (hunter @ Apr 29 2006, 08:41 PM)

WTF Man what was that! Wheres the rest of the story? And next time add detail into it, for example: I got in the helacopter but three zombies is on it so i got my pistol and shoot them. You could explain were you shot the zombies and make it more descriptive. All you have done is put a sentence on each line.

Sorry,But im lazy.

Security Corporate

Posted: April 29, 2006 10:38 pm

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QUOTE (SpeedMan @ Apr 29 2006, 12:49 PM)

QUOTE (hunter @ Apr 29 2006, 08:41 PM)

Sorry,But im lazy.

That's not going to get you anywhere then. If you're going to write something, at least make it tolerable enough for people to read.

KrazyFoYou1243	Posted: April 30, 2006 01:21 am
Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 552 Joined: January 17, 2005	Calm down you guys. We all started somewhere! I'm okay with your writing but you have to stop making new topics. Keep all of them in the same one. I jumped on the helicopter and had an orgasm and my head exploded. --------------------

hunter	Posted: April 30, 2006 02:50 am
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	Im lazy but i could still wip up a better story then that in half the time! --------------------

KrazyFoYou1243	Posted: May 01, 2006 04:24 am
Last hope of Mankind Group: Members Posts: 552 Joined: January 17, 2005	Hunter! You might make him jump off a fire hydrent(screw spelling). "No don't do it!" --------------------

hunter	Posted: May 01, 2006 12:10 pm
Fantasma Cazador Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3702 Joined: December 08, 2004	Is he a midgit or something? --------------------

Jest3r	Posted: May 01, 2006 07:43 pm
Experienced Killer Group: Members Posts: 93 Joined: February 26, 2005	Honestly, I can see that you posted several parts in the forum. However, I believe many would prefer that you post the story in ONE POST. This does not mean typing in the whole story, you can simply make a post, then make additions to the story IN THE SAME POST via the 'Add Reply' command. If you do this, I'm sure that many more people would be able to read and enjoy your story. -------------------- -Jest3r

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